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Well, since people isare trying to interact with this information, I'd use it as an advantage, as. As mentioned by Mattynabib, it really makes sense.

However, if for some reason you prefer not to, the answer would be to make this snippets of information ana homogeneous message. The way it is now, it looks like a mix of a marketing and an interactive element (hence the clicks)  . So what you need is to keep the marketing side and get rid of this perceived affordance. And in order to do it, simply join the information snippets in a sentence, like

6 books listed, 12 succesfulsuccessful listings and 2 active users

Note: I'm not sure if you really want to use this as a marketing copy. If so, I'd look for something better. Also, why "succesful"successful listings"? Are there unsuccessful ones? If so, why to do an implicit mention to that negative aspect?

Well, since people is trying to interact with this information, I'd use as an advantage, as mentioned by Mattynabib, it really makes sense.

However, if for some reason you prefer not to, the answer would be to make this snippets of information an homogeneous message. The way it is now, it looks like a mix of marketing and interactive element (hence the clicks)  . So what you need is to keep the marketing side and get rid of this perceived affordance. And in order to do it, simply join the information snippets in a sentence, like

6 books listed, 12 succesful listings and 2 active users

Note: I'm not sure if you really want to use this as a marketing copy. If so, I'd look for something better. Also, why "succesful listings"? Are there unsuccessful ones? If so, why to do an implicit mention to that negative aspect?

Well, since people are trying to interact with this information, I'd use it as an advantage. As mentioned by Mattynabib, it really makes sense.

However, if for some reason you prefer not to, the answer would be to make this snippets of information a homogeneous message. The way it is now, it looks like a mix of a marketing and an interactive element (hence the clicks). So what you need is to keep the marketing side and get rid of this perceived affordance. And in order to do it, simply join the information snippets in a sentence, like

6 books listed, 12 successful listings and 2 active users

Note: I'm not sure if you really want to use this as a marketing copy. If so, I'd look for something better. Also, why "successful listings"? Are there unsuccessful ones? If so, why to do an implicit mention to that negative aspect?

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Well, since people is trying to interact with this information, I'd use as an advantage, as mentioned by Mattynabib, it really makes sense.

However, if for some reason you prefer not to, the answer would be to make this snippets of information an homogeneous message. The way it is now, it looks like a mix of marketing and interactive element (hence the clicks) . So what you need is to keep the marketing side and get rid of this perceived affordance. And in order to do it, simply join the information snippets in a sentence, like

6 books listed, 12 succesful listings and 2 active users

Note: I'm not sure if you really want to use this as a marketing copy. If so, I'd look for something better. Also, why "succesful listings"? Are there unsuccessful ones? If so, why to do an implicit mention to that negative aspect?