I've launched the website https://XXXXX.com/ a month ago and have now added a landing page to the website to draw more visitors. The landing page consists of four pictures that display different features of the website along with text that describes each feature. At the bottom is a CTA phrase that prompts the visitor to join the community by registering now.
My question is about the text next to each picture. Is the text too long for a landing page or is it ok? I've hilighted the important parts in each column of text in order to capture the visitors attention and to motivate them to read the rest of the text as well. I would also like to know your opinions about the landing page overall and if their are any ways in which it can be improved. You can visit https://XXXXXX.com/ to see it.